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The wind howls beside villager's ears, a huge dark cloud slowly pursues their way. A small village beside the dark forest lives a group of happy farmers. The eaves made of straw shakes when the wind blows on them. People stare at the giant cloud, elder ones whisper their prays, younglings crying in their mom's arm, the pressure starts to grow rapidly. The dark forest starts to shake, the wind blows the leaves off the sapless tree, animals start running away from the cloud, even bears stop it's praying and ran as fast as they can. Thunder strikes far away from the village, it seems like the cloud is eating up the forest or maybe the whole land. Villagers rush into their shaky home and lock up their windows and doors, they knew to themselves, something bad is happening. The cloud slowly floats towards the village closer and closer, the air feels so dense that its impossible to breathe. When the cloud got so close to the village the villagers finally see the true identity, its no lightning striking, its huge tentacles. The tip of the tentacles strike the ground so hard that the whole earth shakes, the thing stops infront of the village and glances down.

"Beware, pathetic bugs, I am the god of destruction, Cthulhu, you shall all bow to me and sacrifice what I want, otherwise, there shall be no more living beings on earth except for me, my rage will ring down on earth, nothing can stop me." The tentacle strikes the ground again the sound is so loud that it covers up the sound of younglings crying. Villagers start coming out of their little houses, they finally got a clear look at the monster, there are hundreds of eyes on his head, the mouth looks like a giant wormhole and the teeth are grown all around the inner mouth. There is no body but only tentacles grown straight below the enormous head. One brave villager picks up an ax and charges toward one of the tentacles, when the ax strikes down on to the tentacle, the ax shattered into a million pieces. Cthulhu looks down and within a splash, the man disappears, all it is left is a pile of flesh and a tentacle on top of the flesh. Cthulhu laughs, the ground starts to shake, the trees start to collapse, the villagers all fell down on the ground and covers their ears. Cthulhu stops laughing "Humans, pathetic!" Cthulhu breathes out giant mist from its mouth and when the mist touches the skin of the villager the inner organ starts to melt until all there is left are piles of flesh and blood. Cthulhu breathes back the mist and glances down at the few survivors, "I demand one human baby inside the dark forest temple every year and it has to be alive with blood and organ and very healthy, if not, the earth shall be struck in half and all living beings shall die." Cthulhu slowly floats away leaving the villagers crying and screaming. After then, every year the villagers will sacrifice one baby, they put the baby inside a basket in the temple, and take away the basket in the next morning, all its left in the basket is a dried-up empty corpse of the baby.

New year blog

10 action verbs

1. Snowboard
I like snowboarding in powders a lot
2. Slept
I slept through the New Year's eve because I don't care anymore
3. Fell
I fell into a giant hole during snowboard upside down and almost died
4. Crashed
I crashed a motorcycle because I was driving too fast.
5. Play
I played a few games with my friend during a sleepover.
6. Abduct
We pranked on our friend by abducting him and threw him into a swimming pool.
7. Party
We partied so hard till five in the morning and I blacked out bad.
8. Fought
I fought in a fistfight in an arena during the party.
9. Slide
I slide down a car lane and almost crashed into a BMW
10. Bleed
I was bleeding a lot when I was in the hole because my face was cut by a tree branch.




A baby used as sacrification for the Cthulhu.
Cthulhu raided a village and killed half of the villagers and command them to sacrifice a baby every year.
Cthulhu sucks out the blood and the organs of the baby and left an empty corpse in the basket.

IN class writing

1. What was your vision as a director/creator for this project?
My vision is a mysterious twisty play
2. What elements of the original story did you maintain in your project?
I maintained the normal storyline
3. What did you change about the original story in your project?
I changed the death of Louise
4. What is the twist or climax of your adaptation?
The twist is that Louise's friends murdered her.
5. What is the strongest part of your project so far?
The strongest part of the project is the ultimate twist
6. What is the weakest part of your project so far?
The weakest part is too much talking and explaining
7. How has this project helped you learn about how stories work?
I'm not sure, I didn't really learn much since I write scripts all the time.
8. How has this project helped you learn how theater works?
I realized that it's hard to transfer a story in to a play because the staging and the actor's gesture is important when there are audiences and I have to consider the view of the audience.

Story of an Hour

Story of an Hour

Genre: Suspense

Characters: Louise, Brently, Josephine, Richards

Setting: Big vila owned by Brently

Plot:
Phone rings, Louise picks up her phone, her husband Brently tells her that he will be back soon, he just need to finish his work and be right back. Louise put down her phone and ran up in her room and made another phone call to a mysterious man, she planned her rich husband's death, and she will take all the heritage so she will split 15% to the killer she hired. But the killer on the phone requested more money, so Louise angrily agreed to his payment. When she heard the news that her husband got killed in an accident, she pretends to be sad in front of all her friends and laughed in her own room. She made a call to the killer thanking what he did and instantly transferred him 150grands, the killer smiles and says, glad doing business with you. During the phone call Josephine and Richards kept interrupting Louise and the moment they broke in her room, She already put her phone away and pretends to be sad again. Josephine tries to comfort her and asked Richards to pour some water from downstairs. Louise gulped down all the water and grabs Josephine's hand telling her that she is her best friend and she will never leave her. But when she got downstairs, Brently walks through the door, Louise shrieks and pretends to be so happy, but Richards turns to her smiles and says glad doing business with you. Louise's eyes filled up with fear and suddenly, Louise puked out some blood and she turns her head to Richards, there is poison in the water. When she's lying on the ground, she sees Brently giving her 'friends' Josephine and Richards some money, Brently then turns around and said, tell the doctor that my wife had a heart attack, now bury her.

Pivotal movement:
Brently died in a planed car crash.
Louise planed her husband's death.
Josephine almost found out.
Brently's actually alive.
Richards poisoned Louise
Josephine and Richards were actually paid by Brently.

The Climax: Brently was alive and he is the killer.

Resolution: Louise died of poison.

https://youtu.be/8NdA7zzw0kE

Apperently won't br graded

Introduction: first two-paragraph, 10 min

Rising: when she heard that her husband is dead - she reveals that she's happy her husband is dead. 40 min

Climax: Husband comes back - Louise died of 'happiness' 10 min


Rising:
When Louise heard that her husband is dead
Cried
Go to her room sat on a chair
Reflecting her life
The realization that she's happy
Went downstairs

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Ideas for The Story of an Hour

We need to enlarge the actor's emotion to make the last twists would be impressive.